Wednesday, 12 March 2014

New Storyline!

  • Pan starting on car (driving on Packhorse Road) into school drive and continues panning onto school sign.
  • She (Miranda) drives into school, with sunglasses on, wearing a glamorous furry coat and carrying a large Ted Baker pink bag.
  • She then walks into the front door of a very traditional private school (i.e. here).
  • She then meets the head girl (Mollie) of the school who is very nice. 
  • They then walk up the main stairs together, with the head girl explaining about the school
  • Cut to Maths room (Mr Tucker) with people sitting on tables, chilling in chairs etc, socializing.
  • The head girl then opens the door to show the new girl the classroom, it falls silent and all the other girls gradually stare at the new one. The new girl has a worried face as she sees the antagonist (Sophie), and makes awkward eye contact.
  • A focus is then put on the antagonist who is glaring back at her.
  • One chair is then shown at the back of the room with the head girl saying, ‘I think that might be your seat!’
  • Antagonist then stands up to greet and shake the new girls hand, saying ‘Welcome to St Mary’s’ as she shakes her hand, pulls forward and (close up of ear and lips) whispers ‘let’s not have a repeat of last time’.

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